Thursday, December 16, 2010

reverb 16 - Friendship


weathering the unknown of who you might be

dissolving the walls made of ice and snow

learning to lay lines in the sand

melting, exploding, you stand


Friendship.
How has a friend changed you or your perspective on the world this year?
Was this change gradual, or a sudden burst?

11 comments:

Yvonne said...

Wow! I love that!

Shannon said...

So very good.

Abigail said...

I was inspired to go into a little verse form today too. I love how the ice&snow turned into sand--beautiful!

wholly jeanne said...

oh my goodness, sugar. this is beyond fabulous. "melting, exploding you stand". yum.

innerbeam said...

I like it :-)

Emily said...

Wow, that is poweful and beautiful and vulnerable all in one! Great response to the prompt:)

Shari said...

I'm not participating in the Reverb but it is nice to read over what everyone has written. I love your poem. I'm ready to stand! And thanks for stopping by my blog, I appreciate your kind comments! Have a fab day!

Average Girl said...

I thought I pop over and check out your blog as Rita has mentioned you several times... really beautiful... I mean that!

Cheers
Tracy
www.goodgirlgoneaverage.blogspot.com

Average Girl said...

plus I don't think we live that far away from each other.. i recognise that coast line!

Bob D. said...

Beautiful!

Jingle said...

cute wriitng..
keep it up.