weathering the unknown of who you might be
dissolving the walls made of ice and snow
learning to lay lines in the sand
melting, exploding, you stand
Friendship.
How has a friend changed you or your perspective on the world this year?
Was this change gradual, or a sudden burst?
10 comments:
Wow! I love that!
So very good.
I was inspired to go into a little verse form today too. I love how the ice&snow turned into sand--beautiful!
oh my goodness, sugar. this is beyond fabulous. "melting, exploding you stand". yum.
I like it :-)
Wow, that is poweful and beautiful and vulnerable all in one! Great response to the prompt:)
I'm not participating in the Reverb but it is nice to read over what everyone has written. I love your poem. I'm ready to stand! And thanks for stopping by my blog, I appreciate your kind comments! Have a fab day!
I thought I pop over and check out your blog as Rita has mentioned you several times... really beautiful... I mean that!
Cheers
Tracy
www.goodgirlgoneaverage.blogspot.com
plus I don't think we live that far away from each other.. i recognise that coast line!
cute wriitng..
keep it up.
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